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Product Page Copy

Write conversion-optimized product or service page copy that transforms features into outcomes, handles objections inline, and drives a specific conversion action.

Context

Product pages fail when they list features without connecting them to outcomes. Engineers write "supports webhooks" — buyers need "get notified instantly when events happen, so your team can respond in minutes, not hours." This skill bridges that gap with a structured approach to outcome-first product copy.

Procedure

  1. List every product feature. For each, write the outcome using the format: "[Feature] so you can [outcome] which means [business impact]."
  2. Group features into 3-5 value themes. Each theme becomes a page section with a benefit-first headline.
  3. Write the page hero: product-specific headline that names the category and primary outcome. Subhead with the key differentiator.
  4. For each value theme section: benefit headline, 2-3 sentence explanation, 2-4 supporting features as bullet points, visual slot (screenshot, diagram, or demo).
  5. Write the social proof section: testimonial from a user who experienced the specific outcomes claimed on this page.
  6. Write the comparison section (optional): "How [product] compares" with an honest feature table — highlight genuine advantages, acknowledge gaps honestly.
  7. Write the page-specific CTA: action relevant to this product (not just "Contact us"), with a risk-reducer (free trial, demo, no credit card).

Output Format

# Product Page Copy — [Product/Feature Name]

## Hero
- **Headline**: "[Outcome-first statement]"
- **Subhead**: "[Key differentiator or how it works]"
- **CTA**: "[action]" | **Secondary**: "[lower commitment]"

## Feature-to-Outcome Map
| Feature | Outcome | Business Impact |
|---------|---------|-----------------|
| [feature] | [so you can...] | [which means...] |

## Value Theme Sections

### Section 1: [Benefit headline]
[2-3 sentence explanation of the outcome]
- [Feature 1]: [short outcome statement]
- [Feature 2]: [short outcome statement]
- [Feature 3]: [short outcome statement]
- **Visual**: [screenshot/diagram description]

### Section 2: [Benefit headline]
[2-3 sentence explanation]
- [Features as bullet points]
- **Visual**: [description]

### Section 3: [Benefit headline]
[2-3 sentence explanation]
- [Features as bullet points]
- **Visual**: [description]

## Social Proof
> "[Testimonial specific to this product's outcomes]"
> — [Name], [Role] at [Company]

## Comparison (optional)
| Capability | [Product] | Alternative A | Alternative B |
|------------|-----------|---------------|---------------|
| [capability] | [status] | [status] | [status] |

## CTA Section
- **Headline**: "[outcome reminder + urgency]"
- **Button**: "[specific action]"
- **Risk reducer**: "[free trial / no CC / money-back]"

QA Rubric (scored)

  • Outcome clarity (0-5): every feature connects to a user outcome, not just a capability.
  • Progressive disclosure (0-5): scannable headlines with detail available for those who want it.
  • Proof density (0-5): every section has evidence (screenshot, data, testimonial, demo).
  • Differentiation (0-5): reader understands why this over alternatives without explicit competitor attacks.

Examples (good/bad)

  • Good: "Feature: 'Real-time collaboration' → Outcome: 'Edit documents simultaneously with your team' → Impact: 'Ship docs 3x faster without version conflicts.' Visual: split-screen showing two cursors editing."
  • Bad: "Features: real-time collaboration, version history, commenting, permissions, integrations." — a feature list with no outcomes, no proof, no visuals.

Variants

  • Technical deep-dive mode: includes code snippets, API examples, and architecture diagrams for developer-facing products.
  • Service page mode: replaces features with deliverables and process steps — for agency and consulting service pages.